Salary Negotiation Email

Subject: Question About the [Role] Offer

Dear [Hiring Manager Name],

Thank you again for offering me the [Role] position at [Company]. I am excited about the opportunity and appreciated learning more about the team throughout the process.

After reviewing the offer, I wanted to ask whether there is flexibility on the base salary. Based on the scope of the role, my experience with [relevant skill or responsibility], and market compensation for similar positions, I was hoping to discuss a salary of [Target Salary].

I remain very interested in joining [Company] and would be happy to discuss this further. Thank you again for the offer and for considering my request.

Best regards,
[Your Name]

Subject: Following Up on the [Role] Offer

Hi [Hiring Manager Name],

Thank you again for the offer to join [Company]. I am very excited about the role and the team.

I wanted to share that I have another offer with a compensation package closer to [Amount or Range]. [Company] remains a very strong preference for me, and I wanted to ask whether there is any flexibility to bring the offer closer to that range.

I appreciate your consideration and would be glad to discuss what might be possible.

Best,
[Your Name]

Subject: Offer Details for [Role]

Dear [Hiring Manager Name],

Thank you again for the [Role] offer. I am excited about the opportunity to join [Company].

I understand there may be limits on base salary flexibility. Would it be possible to discuss other parts of the package, such as [signing bonus, equity, relocation support, bonus target, or start date]? I would appreciate exploring whether there is a way to make the overall offer work for both sides.

Thank you again for your time and consideration.

Best regards,
[Your Name]